David Cronenberg and the Cinema of the Extreme

Naked Lunch

My mistakes

I had those comments, thank's all.

tttphan a dit...

"The first think" => thing
(I think you wrote it too fast ^^)

tttphan a dit...

Hi Yann !

I have to make corrections so...

"the twenty eigth" : there is just a switch between the "t" and the "h"

"I enjoy outdoor to" : if you want to say that you like outdoor activities like our teacher, the "o" is missing "I enjoy outdoor too"

"isn'nt" => isn't

ImacVok a dit...

youhhouu yann !

I was born => was borned
The Université de Montréal => Montréal university

Virginie a dit...

Hello Yann,

I've found some mistakes:

- "My email adress is ..." : there is two "d" in address.

-"It was really interesting for discover cinema, audiovisual..." : I think it's not "interesting for" but "interesting to".

Vincent a dit...

Hi Yann !

I found some mistakes.

"until I obtain my Baccalaureat S". I think "I obtained" (Past tense) is more correct.

"for two years at the university Paul Valery" => "for two years at Paul Valery University"

Corrections

I saw these mistakes:

• On Aurore's blog :

On "Strange story about a psychologist !" post :
"in different locations in the city" --> "In differents locations"
"after an hour of cry and scream"-->"After an hour of cries an screams"

• On Alexis's blog :

On "Inside Weta Digital" post :
"divided into weta workshop"-->"divided into weta workshops"
"I’ve discover it"-->"I've discovered it"
"I didn’t found"--> "I didn't find"

On "Making-of - Advert BBC" ppost :
"It’s a making-of of an advert"-->"It's a making of an advert"


On " Video, Quentin Tarantino, How he makes movies" post :
"who explain how he makes movies" -> "who explains how he makes movies"

• Yoann's blog :

It was very hard because there is a lot of things to read. But the blog is OK, i didn't find any mistakes.

• Alexander's blog is OK

• Arnaud's blog is OK too

I'm not sure of all those corrections...